Beautiful Florida;
Bright sun, bright bright sun!
Shining on the beach, making the water glisten.
Light breezes blowing in and out.
Palm trees swaying side to side.
Smokin hot temperatures
Feet all in the flaming hot sand
Lots of swimming and sand castles.
Family, friends and food.
Shopping
It's always fun when your having too much fun!
But at the same time, my visit goes by really fast and I never wanna leave.
Monday, April 30, 2012
Which way? - "Failing" Poem
Sunday, April 29, 2012
Sunrise: A Day in Life Poem
5 am.
Dreaming, wrapped up in the covers, feeling so warm and every problem just seems to float away.
6 am.
A little soft voice yelling "Rise and Shine, time for school."
What happened to the short break we have each week?
......................
Ah, it went so fast. All the problems I had the night before seem to creep back up to me.
Just a look out the window,
Its still dark and I have to get up, just to be on time for my bus.
No matter how much I dread it, there's no choice.
Its always the same routine just sometimes mixed up in different orders.
Put clothes on, brush my teeth, wash my face, do my hair and there's just a little time to
glance in the mirror before my day actually begins.
Then the last words I say to my family is “Bye"
When I'm on my way to the bus stop
And it still leaves me wondering everyday, will that be the last time I see my family?
Friday, April 13, 2012
Letter to readers
Dear, reader:
Hi, my name is Atley Green. I'm a 9th grader at Carbondale Community High School and in Mrs. Hayes English I class. My favorite things to do are playing basketball, listening to music and chilling at the pool with family and friends. But in English were discussing poetry, but poetry isn't my favorite, I never really understood how to write it. But were assigned to think and type out our own poetry book. At first I thought that would be hard but later I learned that I enjoyed it. Maybe I will do this more often.
My favorite poem I wrote was the "Musical" poem. I love music, when I think of music, I think of rhythm, beat, motion and people enjoying themselves. Thats pretty much what the poem is describing. The poem just seemed to flow right, I just really enjoyed making this poem.
My least favorite poem I wrote was the "A day in the life" Poem. I really couldn't think of anything that would be good for that one. At first, I didn't really know how to start it, a whole bunch of beginning sentences popped up but didn't flow right. So I just used what I could think of and made a "Routine" poem.
During the poetry unit I have learned many things. My whole view towards poetry has changed. By writing and thinking of my own poems, I've learned that its not that hard. I always thought it was hard to write one because I thought they had to rhyme. But by making my own poetry book, I've learned different.
By writing the poems in this book, I've learned that anyone can be a poet. It doesn't take much work. It might take some thinking and usage of descriptive and powerful words. But it could also be a simple laid back poem. Either one is fine.
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