Monday, September 26, 2011

Comments:)

These are my comments I left:


Hey Amarri!!!! This is your little sister. That book sounds really interesting, I think I read a few pages of it when you gave it to me to read. That one day when I needed a book for English after I finished mine. Just the few pages I read was interesting. But your description of your book is very great! I need to finish reading the book.


Hey Kaja! I loved all your pictures, they all go well with your book. I know that because I'm reading the same book. I especially love the picture where it has a reflection thats says "What if" and also the one where it has a heart around love never fails. Those are really good pictures. I hope you enjoyed or are enjoying your book! Bye. 


Hey Sommer!! Very good description of your book. I really want to read that book because my book was the first one of the series. It sounds very interesting and I want to find out what happens to Maggie and Caleb while on the trip. Can't wait to read it. Also you should think about reading Leaving Paradise, if you haven't already, its a really good book. But anyway  Great job!


Hey Kenzie! I recently watched the movie to your book. I thought it was really good. If you haven't seen the movie, you should. I liked that you gave a really good description on your book, so people reading this can have a good thought on what they are about to read and whats happening. I need to read this book soon! Bye.


Hey Iman! Your book sounds interesting. Also here are the answers that you asked towards my book. Yes Maggie had lots of friends before her accident. It was mainly her leg that got hurt, she had a few scratches though. No, Maggie was not the driver, she was the one that got ran over by the driver. But anyways good job!

Recording

http://www.classicalconnect.com/music/4879
    The recording I picked is Ballade, from Romantic Pieces, Op. 115 by the composer Jean Sibelius. With Shirley Trissell on the piano and Emma Steele playing the violin. I really liked this recording. I picked it because I thought it went well with my story. At the beginning of the song, the volume would get all high then back down. It keeps doing that throughout the song. Thats pretty much how my story went too. After the accident, Maggie could never forgive Caleb for running over her that night.
   But when Caleb got out of jail and began going to the same school as Maggie and when they began working at the same house together. They began to bond  but when Maggie found out that Caleb was still messing with his ex girlfriend, they kind of split apart again. But its like they could never be apart because they would just get back together again. The song is kind of slow and seems sad but mixed with a little happiness. "Leaving Paradise" is that kind of story, there are moments of exciting, happiness, hopeful and then of depressing, sad, and angry. But thats what makes it a really good story, all of the emotions that each character has.

Friday, September 9, 2011

Awesome Pics About My Story


The cover of my book I'm reading

Caleb Becker: one of the main characters that ran over Maggie.

Maggie Armstrong: another main character that gets hit by the car

Emergency: when Maggie got hit by a car by Caleb drunk driving

Kendra: Calebs ex, before he went to jail

Caleb in jail, after hitting Maggie

Maggie's mom works at a restaurant

                                                       
The therapy Maggie had to get after the accident


Tennis was Maggies favorite sport, and she had to get the courage to continuing playing after the accident


Wrestling was Calebs favorite sport

Caleb and Maggie had to forgive each other and forget their past